WALT: Write a persuasive speech.
Things I did well:
I had so many reasons to talk about cats are more better than dog.
My voice was clear.
Things I can do better:
I have to write more so it can stop at 3minit.
pros
Good
We are gonna stay home and sleep.
Going to GI and buying stuff.
We will listen to mum and dad.
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cons
Bad
I don't want my parents to swear all the time.
My brothers be notiy to my mum and dad.
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